Monday, October 12, 2009

If I were A Poem

If I Were A Poem

If I were a poem
I extend my hatefulness
With thoughts and words.
I use my paper to write explosive
Words and use my pen to express
My fearless. Like a antler winning
His fight with his horns.
If I were a poem
I express my feelings
Through hate and fear.
If I were a poem
I fly so high to bring down my fears.
And led my papers flow and my pen been
Guiding me.


If I were a poem
My words would fall from my papers.
And put down my thoughts and start
Writing words again and again.
If I were a poem
People would know
How I feel by reading my hatefulness
And Fearless of this poem. If ONLY Y WERE A POEM.

4 comments:

Anonymous said...

Nice poem, I like what you talk about, and how u express..

sehrish said...

the poem is really good the way you used your words and the comparson that you had and last stanza is awsome

April said...

i like how you compare to the antler.
good work. nice job.

Anonymous said...

i loved when you said "I extend my hatefulness
With thoughts and words."