Monday, October 12, 2009

If I were a poem

If i were a poem
I would express my feelings
and say everything that is on my mind.
So many backstabbers and haters
they say that they will always be there for you.
But in the end they never succeed with favors.

If i were a poem
I would let my hand take over
and my pen would run across the paper.
Writing how my friendships are getting colder.
Why does everyone have such cold hearts?
Wish i had pictures of them to hang up and
just throw darts.

If i were a poem
I would be as strong as i can be
With hidden feelings that only through
my eyes you can see.
Damn it if i were a poem
I would just be me.

4 comments:

Ilse Martinez said...

Nice poem, I like how u express about the haters!!

sehrish said...

i like the last stanza it stands out really good

Wouldn'tYouLikeToKnow said...

the middle stanza was is the strongest. When you talk about throwing darts I can really picture your anger, but in a funny way.

Viking Writers said...

Muy Bien!! (Very Good) I like the last stanza a whole lot! I like how you said: D*#@ if I were a poem I would just be me! Keep on writing that poetry dude (or dudette)!