Friday, October 2, 2009

I am what I am
I am a girl with great desire
A girl with humongous dreams
Dreams of success (yea)
Dreams of love (aaauuu)
Dreams of the right path finding me
I am what I am


My mother cares for me
Like a nurse 4 a patient
My father dreams as martin Luther King (MLK)
Of me going to college
I am what I am

A girl who’s full of kind kitty kindness
A girl who’s full of friends
A girl with plenty of luck
A paradise garden with abundance of flowers
I am what I am

A girl who’s passionate about college
Like a cardiologist about a heart.
I am what I am
I am a girl with magnificent opportunities
Who’s lovin’ her life
I am a girl with bunch of people looking after her
& the sun is always smiling on me
I am what I am


But sometimes
I find myself saying
I am smooth (ash)
I am cool (AAA)
I’ll get through
So I don’t need to fall apart
I am what I am

3 comments:

asykes2010 said...

i like the metaphors you used in the first and second paragraphs...
Nice poem =]

Flory said...

i really like your comparisons..and how they go with your poem..nice!

IJL said...

I like the similes that u used in your poem.