Tuesday, January 5, 2010

Ode to A Laptop

…. A laptop dedicated to write and explore the internet. Laptop you help me finish my final essay writing in a white, blank paper. Laptop I kneel before your shiny letters that help me spell and write lots of paragraphs thank you for making my life easier and faster. From you I learned that spelling is better this way and grammar too. I thank you for your corrections without you I wouldn’t know how to check my essay. Oh!! Laptop you make paper and pencil more advance in everything.

3 comments:

Maximo said...

i like when you said that the writing in the labtop makes your life easier and faster!!

sehrish said...

i like your you sentence "your shiny letters that help me spell and write lots of paragraphs."that is true

Writing dude said...

> thank you for your corrections without you I wouldn’t know how to check my essay

Great lines! I love it!!