You were there to love and care for me
With opened arms
And i never came to you
You have been there ever since i took my first breath on earth
and i wilil be there when you take your last.
I see that you are fading away as each day goes by
so today i ask please don't go away
We all want you to stay
your kids
your grandkids
all your loved ones saying
don't go away
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4 comments:
Wow,
this was really touching. I like how u used the sentences about breathing, first and last breaths. really good.
Shanika Ray
This was a short piece but straight to the pint. It's a very touching piece as well. Great job. :)
I like it. It expresses how someone would say when they want a special someone to stay.
keep on the good work
good poem.
i like the way you organized it by the events in your life.
when it mentions the first and last breath!
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